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thecraig
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0 posted 2001-05-08 06:49 AM



Dare to love
though afraid
on how love may behave
& where the way fear of love may turn.
Anxiety evolves, people yearn!;

Emotions build combining,
knowledge learning
& rooting human instinct,
they need discerning;

Dreaming surges
when nature pulls are heavy
show a range of options,
visions steady;

Being a family may be trying,
adventurous passion relying,
relying on discipline, faithfulness, united,
that life's faltering tree's be righted, reunited!;



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Mother_Earth
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1 posted 2001-05-08 10:24 AM


thecraig, you have written a lot of feelings for all of us to see.  But they are the feeling we should already have.  And you are showing us , maybe, how to use these feelings?  I enjoyed your words,  ME
Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-05-08 10:50 AM


yes, dare to love and try to keep your emotions intact....impossible!!!
helen smith
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3 posted 2001-05-08 12:00 PM


enjoyed it Craig ....and I dare
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4 posted 2001-05-08 12:12 PM


nice write, i enjoyed this very much.
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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