Open Poetry #13 |
Then Upon This Morning Bed |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Then Upon This Morning Bed ~*Marge Tindal*~ Awaken me from slumber deep lash of eye - no longer sleep fragranced in forever keep breathless want of you Then upon this morning bed tousled curl upon this head take your need of me instead as I breathe you slowly in In gentle whispers of my name I am lulled to sleep again Hold that smile - for in a while I will awaken ~ full beguile ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
BeeYOOTeeFULL |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful Marge, very nice [This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 05-07-2001).] |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Marge, I think I am ready for bed!! I want to wake up to ALL that you have discribed. How beautiful. ME |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful and soft, lovely! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Imagining you in full beguile..and little ele..boggles the mind, Marge |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Marge,...this is warming, peaceful and truly a pleasure to read. On my third. Lovely Lady. *Peace. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ Why thank you, friend ! Whiskey~ Glad you liked. Thank you. MotherEarth~ Thank you. Night-Night ! Walker~ Pleased to know you enjoyed it. Balladeer~ Beats a bowl of Cornflakes ? SpitFire~ Awwww ! Thank you for letting me know. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--This is so softly sensual and lovely...wonderful...you are. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my but this was so delicate (not really a poetic adjective) but that is how I felt it to be. I loved it, and put it into the delicate section of my library! You be writing sweet nothings well Lady Marge. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Thank you, hon. I really enjoyed this one myself ~ Mysteria~ Delicate will do quite nicely, dearie. Thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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