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Open Poetry #13

NOT!!! I don't like it!!!

JulieAnn
Senior Member

since 2000-06-12

Posts 754
Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2001-05-07 07:56 PM

I don't like it!! But I need to keep it here because I am at the library and this seems the only safe way to keep fropm losing it so please read at your own risk!!!!!

Do you understand?
What I said to you?
Did you hear my words?
I was wondering if you
were listening
'Cause my life
has fallen apart
and there is a horrible pain
in my heart
a guise of cheerfulness
hides well my unhappiness
coming up once more
for another breath of air
and your eyes are reflecting
all of my fears
I crawl inside my shell
hide behide my wall
close my eyes and pretend
that I don't hear you call
digging deeper to my grave
no soul left for God to save
to his carnage become a slave
in his name we take the blame
our sinful lives put us to shame
sending his worms into our skin
peircing our flesh like a pin
nowhere to hide, no one wins
time to repent for all of our sins

Julie :)

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-05-07 08:03 PM

Don't you hate when you don't have any paper Julie???

Looks good to me. . . but, perhaps later, it will be better. . .

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redheart angrybraids
Member

since 2000-04-16

Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii

2 posted 2001-05-08 11:46 PM

intense words,
like the detail and the recognition

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids

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