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Heartstarter
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since 2001-03-14
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0 posted 2001-05-07 06:27 PM



My Aunt Lucy
had big blonde hair
that wafted around her head
like the sticky silk of a drunk spider.

My Aunt Lucy
wore her skirts too short,
violating the public
with fat pink thighs thicker than her waist.

My Aunt Lucy
drew her eyebrows on,
and painted her lips with vaseline
for a greasily seductive shine.

My Aunt Lucy
wore six inch spike heels
that made the fat pink thighs
look like cold pork popsicles.

My Aunt Lucy
wasn't allowed at our house,
but she always gave us new case quarters
whenever she saw us on the street.

My Aunt Lucy
died when I was twelve
somebody saw the cold pork popsicles
sticking out of a bin somewhere.

My Aunt Lucy
got her name in the paper,
the sisters chipped in for a longer skirt
and buried her in the back end of the yard.


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Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
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Washington State
1 posted 2001-05-07 07:40 PM


Oh, poor Aunt Lucy.  Pretty good poem though.  Joyce
redheart angrybraids
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 410
honolulu, hawaii
2 posted 2001-05-08 11:52 PM


this poem is so good,
the rhythm
the story
the every thing
i loved it

Kindly,
Redheart Angrybraids


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