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| Open Poetry #13 |
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I went into the woods. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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*Gallery Reading Room* today Wordweaver I went into the woods not to find you, but to find myself you see, I've been lost for a while now too not knowing which way to go what path to take not knowing if I should follow my heart (I guess I've always followed my heart) or, if I should listen to the sounds and the words of those who seem to think that they know me better than I know myself (there seem to be a lot of them these days) so, this morning I heard a song a song sung sweet and low carried by the wind through my window it was time for me to go and so, I went they were ready for me ready to share with me the things that they had learned the words that they had heard the songs that they had sung all these things they gave to me Wordweaver so that I might know which path to take which way to go follow your heart follow your heart follow your heart today Wordweaver I went into the woods not to find you, but to find myself and in finding myself, Wordweaver, I found you Note: Wordweaver represents the poet in all of us. . . thank you. . .  ----------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 05-07-2001).] |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Very nice and I would like to go to that place to find the right Words. ME |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Very sweet and very true. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I think I'm in a kind of sentimental mood today, because this one brought tears.Thanks for your wonderful weaving. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very Nice Sven, Painted a lovely picture in my mind Sounds like it is a wonderful place Julie |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sven...Lots of stars out tonight. Such illumination. Bob |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ This is lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
..and on your walk, The gift you found, Brings love and light, Smiles to lips, And tears to eyes. Thank you for sharing, this John. You bring more joy than you'll ever realize, I'm sure of it!  still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed this Sven...James |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"today Wordweaver I went into the woods not to find you, but to find myself" What a wonderful tribute to the poet in all of us Sven. This is a beautiful centerpeice for your Passion's Gallery of talent. Beautiful sentiments ... you've captured these thoughts in a most equisite way! Best wishes, /Kit |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
to the sounds and the words of those who seem to think that they know me better than I know myself" If I don't know myself than who am I to tell you who you are. Sven the words you share are always sincere, don't change for anyone except yourself. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Fantastic work, Sir Sven... how much I admire the words that flow from your pen... regards, sudhir |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sven~ this is really wonderful....very timely for me.... SEA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
beautiful loved it |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
truthful...loving...and beautiful.. thanks for sharing..and keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
You portray the essense of poetry..writing that takes us to a place where we discover who we are and what we are about..not writing to please but sometimes in our truthfullness we do please..because we do have common emotions and experiences and the need to understand others. Beautiful write! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, The woods must be a popular place of late as well as a sifting through feelings and trying to find were the soul wants to be, this is truly beautiful Sven, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow. . . thanks to everyone for your words. . . and thanks for reading this. . . yes, the woods to seem to be very popular these days. . . simply because I think, for most of us, it's been a long winter. . .  ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
John, you found wonderful Inspiration, I love nature....this is fantastic...  Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your "what to do" dilemma is a familiar one... This is beautiful, Sven. |
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