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Open Poetry #13

Demonic Cornflakes

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2001-05-07 03:08 PM

Black dragons
in my cornflakes
jump out of milk
and snap at me
demonized cereal
makes breakfast
like a horror picture show
scarring me
like a kid
puking like a drunk
I want to scream but can't
as nutritious corn
froms demonic head
and reaches for me
alarm rings
waking me for the day
skip breakfast
and run past
my posessed cereal box
but in the back of my mind
I know I can't skip breakfast forver
so one day
I know
I will have to eat my cornflakes.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-05-07 03:11 PM

Brad...this is fantastic!! I guess that's why I eat fruit for breakfast LOL

SEA

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2001-05-07 03:16 PM

Thank you SEA

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2001-05-07 03:41 PM

A fun read, loved this!

*chuckles*

~Tier

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-05-07 06:50 PM

I have to admit. . . the title brought me in. . . and the words kept me here. . .

great poem!!!

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Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

5 posted 2001-05-07 07:49 PM

Thanks!

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

6 posted 2001-05-07 07:56 PM

Brad, you're one of a kind....I enjoyed this piece....it's very nice and you have quite the imagination.....peace!!

Nathan

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

7 posted 2001-05-08 03:56 AM

Dude! Switch to Cheerios... much happier. Good luck with the flakes. I think I'll have a bagle tomorrow. Peace!

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

8 posted 2001-05-08 04:12 AM

"....one day I will have to eat my cornflakes..." or they will eat you!!!
Excellent and entertaining read, my friend, but I think tomorrow I will eat pancakes!!!

Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!

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