Open Poetry #13 |
A New Beginning |
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
A new beginning Close your eyes, and travel with me Discover trails of hope and life Even if there’s no tomorrow Even if there’s no way back Close your eyes and watch the rainbow How colorful ribbons represents love Through darkness and wet falling rain A touch of sunbeam’s warm embrace Close your eyes and open your senses Experient first the world inside Inhale the air of loving peace Open your mind by spirits touch She shows the beauty of Mother Earth Captured in wild waterfalls In mountains altitude and proudly Inside the wave of nature’s strife Enchanting spring full of birth and new life Golden sun spreads her summer warmth Fiery leaves inside autumn’s storm Winter cold within the dead Yes within the dead But not the end Cause A new beginning Yes, a new beginning Within promises of new life Reaching out, knowing how to survive While we practice what elders have taught us Haven’t we all taken our own place in this circle of life? And that’s why we have to respect The reason to protect Because our path is woven With so much preciouses lives ‘Cause we have taken part In the wave of Nature’s heart Most precious gift of love From our Creator above. Charisma ~*TMP*~ 27 april 2001 [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 05-07-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, Charisma, in form and message. Yes, a new beginning every year when spring is new and winter's gone while land's replenished. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
My eyes are closed... |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I loved your message, Charisma....a superb write!! Nathan |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ this is so pretty....I like this VERY much!! SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very nice, Charisma! Kathleen Blake |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
superb Charisma. . . I love new beginnings. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Just look at you ... this is BEAUTIFUL ! 'Enchanting spring full of birth and new life Golden sun spreads her summer warmth Fiery leaves inside autumn’s storm Winter cold within the dead Yes within the dead But not the end Cause A new beginning Yes, a new beginning Within promises of new life Reaching out, knowing how to survive While we practice what elders have taught us Haven’t we all taken our own place in this circle of life?' Your thoughts are exquisite ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
VAS: thank you for your nice reply, I'm so glad that you liked it. Interloper: And do you see the beautyful world inside you, cause it isn't nature only, that have new beginnings..... Nate: thank you for the superb my friend. Sea: thank you, I am really happy that you liked it. Irish Rose: thank you my friend. Sven: thank you so much for the superb my friend. Vandana: glad you enjoyed it. Marge:Thank you my friend, I always appreciate your replies very much.... Thank you all for your time to read and reply ((hugs)) Charisma |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Thank you for the mini vacation. It was very refreshing. |
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