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The "Day In - Day Out" Show |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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The eastward skies opened up like a little girl's smiling face Just as dark clouds rushed away as if part of a big race. A new morning had risen with sun's bright and dazzling rays A new day had thus begun in summer birds' chirping sways. My eyes rolled to see the other side where my shadow lay The westward horizon today seemed much more than away. It felt so strange that the yesterday looked a distant past As I said bye to the stars who left the scene fleeing fast. Yet I know that like a dream this sunny day will be gone And I would stay back to welcome night stars to shine till dawn. This cycle will thus go on with day following the night Continued by the night rushing behind crimson day light. And life will go on with me following my shadow's sight Continued by my dark shape playing catch-up with my might. And all this time and all these years in hope's warm afterglow A candle of faith in my own being will host my show. **** Maybe the title is a bit weird... hopefully the content is not... Thanks in advance for coming by... [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 05-07-2001).] |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
I dont think its weird at all , its wonderful, paints a pretty picture all the way through. A very nice write  Btw thanks for reading my work too Julie |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I'll light a candle to that |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Lovely words, Sudhir... ~Tier |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Thought the title very fitting,, nicely done.. There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir: "The eastward skies opened up like a little girl's smiling face" I very much enjoy your take on things...thank you. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you know what I like best about this show Sudhir????  no reruns. . . well written my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Julie, thank you very much Interloper, thanks for the light Tier, feels good to hear that... thanks Jamie, your words and visits are much appreciated, my friend... thanks Martie, same feelings here for all your writings... thanks, my friend Sir Sven, well said... thanks for coming by, my friend Regards to all, sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
" And life will go on with me following my shadow's sight Continued by my dark shape playing catch-up with my might." Ah Sudhir ... always a pleasure to read your vantage on life. I chase this shadow endlessly too, and found this to be a very visual piece for me. Very nicely written, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir, my friend~ Most enjoyable. 'A candle of faith in my own being will host my show.' Yes ... it will be so. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Kit, it is my pleasure to have you read my chain of thoughts... thanks you so much Marge, I am very glad that you found this enjoyable... thank you, my friend Regards to both of you, Sudhir |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is lovely Sudi and the title is not weird, it is PERFECT! enjoyed it muchly my friend. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Maree, I am glad that you found this enjoyable... Thanks for coming by... Regards, Sudhir |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Excellent, sir. Thanks for sharing. Melton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, life goes on and to use the phrase "following your shadow" is a wonderful way to see that..thank you, Sudhir. Kathleen Blake |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Melton, thank you for coming by Kathleen, your thoughts are always appreciated, thank you Regards, sudhir |
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