Open Poetry #13 |
Time Passes |
whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Time spent wondering Gazing up to the clouds Eyes fixed on nothing Staring into space Mind not really thinking Dreaming of other times snap into reality How long has it been ? What felt like five minutes Was more like an hour Where did everyone go ? Disapeared like the sun into the sea The sky has turned from blue to black Eyes not even noticing the transformation The air has grown colder Not holding warmth as before My eyes feel heavy They begin to close My mind drifts Yet more dreams of a different kind Creep into my mind As my body sleeps [This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 05-07-2001).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Nicely penned... Regards, Sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiskeyGal~ Been in one of those 'time passes' zones from time to time ~ I visited your poetry web pages ... NICE ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
"Dissapeared like the sun in the sea" What a powerful thought......I liked this Whiskey....brilliant writing!! Nathan |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hopefully, they are dreams softly spoken. . . great poem. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Write on. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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