Open Poetry #13 |
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Silences |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
![]() Should I say there is mystery too deep for mere words that only silences forever answers? What word shall hold sorrow sitting at the heart of things we have left to patience and truth? What voice speaks to moonlight, bathes an ordinary wall washed white in an empty room? What speaks an older tongue in languages yet discovered to beg a life to stay? Graphics: Ian Britton "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
enjoyed, many good expressive phrases here [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 05-06-2001).] |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Irish Rose: thank you. Glad you enjoyed. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Should I say there is mystery too deep for mere words that only silences forever answers?' So wonderfully expressed, Julian! This is fantastic work...I truly enjoyed this! sp ![]() to be with you... |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Wowzers! The combination of the two arts is astounding my friend, just fantastic presentation on this one. ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
lots of interpretive possibilities here. very interesting! \\ |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
snowpants: Thank you so much for your kind comment. Mysteria: So good I got the two arts together. Thank you so much for helping me. wandering glider: love the glider sig. Thank you. I'm glad the multi-layered affect came through. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
that would be the voice of life Julian. . . excellent. . . ![]() ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Sven: You are so correct. The mysteries of life, love, death etc. simply have no earthly answers that are absolute. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Julian~ This render is so ponderously wonderful. Your thoughts gently caress my mind ~ Thank you for sharing 'silences' ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Marge: so lovely of you to comment. Thank you. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully written Julia ... oh how I love to ponder, and you've done it exceptionally well here, excellent phrasing. I really enjoyed this, thank you! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Kit: yes, I've always pondered and been aware of life's mysteries and questions. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Julian, very good work much enjoyed. ![]() parker |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Parker: so nice of you to comment. Thank you for your time. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Julian....this was a most intriguing and mysteriously beautiful message....indeed, life and death have voices of their own...and the language that they speak is interpreted in so many different ways. Awesome write! Hugs to you!!!!!!!!! dawn
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Martha: dear lady thank you for taking time out of a speeding schedule to read and comment. ((Hug)) "I am not now that which I have been." |
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