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OLIAS
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0 posted 2001-04-29 05:01 PM


Netmeeting (for my fiance)

I had almost forgotten
how wonderful you are
framed in bitmapped beauty
my CCTV star,
no pixel degredation
can spoil your perfect poise,
nor web cams compensation
nor flurries of white noise,
A magic Mona lisa
from heaven on my screen
your soft voice in my headset
so loving calm, serene,
I pray to software heaven
that although we are apart
each night I see and hear you
and hold you, in my heart.

Olias.


© Copyright 2001 Mick Yates - All Rights Reserved
Mabel A. Dilley
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1 posted 2001-04-29 05:02 PM


Very nice. Loved the rhythm.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2001-04-29 05:33 PM


Nice poem.  Hope you meet one like her in real life.  Joyce
Amuse_mi
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3 posted 2001-04-29 05:42 PM


I'm with Joyce on this one.
Blaec
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The Sunshine State
4 posted 2001-04-29 05:45 PM


Lovely poem.
Lucky lady!

OLIAS
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5 posted 2001-04-29 09:34 PM


Julian,
Thanks for your reply, I'm glad you liked.

Joyce,
Thanks for your kind words and I already have, this poems for her, we got engaged a few weeks ago and she flew back to the states last thursday, but we meet online every night.

Amus-mi,
Thanks for dropping by and your kind reply.

Blaec,
Your very kind and I'm a lucky man.

Regards to you all,
Olias.

latin passion
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6 posted 2001-04-30 12:35 PM


congrats to you and your lady. LP
JLR
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7 posted 2001-04-30 11:07 AM


Oh how technology has changed our lives!  Congratulations and loved your poem.
Janet Marie
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8 posted 2001-04-30 12:54 PM


Ahhh. a happy ending on the net...
a sometimes to rare thing these days..
very cool Olias...
and I love the wit in this..
tying in the computer tech lingo with the emotion and devotion...
great write
Congrats on being engaged groovy poet  

There are two lasting bequests
that we can hope to instill in our children
one is roots ...
the other ... wings.

OLIAS
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Pearl city Iowa
9 posted 2001-04-30 02:43 PM


Latin Passions,
Thanks for your congratulations, they are much appreciated.

J.L.R,
Thanks for your kind words, I curse technology most of the time but it has its uses lol.

J.M.,
Hi, Its amazing when I first met my fiance we had to type everything, now its video and full voice, it makes being apart easier. Thanks for your reply, and the congrats, poet friend.

Regards to you all from Judy and I.
Olias.

suthern
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10 posted 2001-05-09 10:50 AM


I'm glad things worked out so well for you... may your happiness be eternal! *S*
Sweeetsuz
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Fresno CA.
11 posted 2001-05-09 11:10 AM


Makes me sad I did not find you first (giggles)

Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all


OLIAS
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Pearl city Iowa
12 posted 2001-05-09 11:41 AM


Thank you for your kind words Suthern, we wish you well. May your muse always be with you and talent flow from your pen. Take care,

Regards,
Olias.

Sven
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13 posted 2001-05-09 06:21 PM


the wonders of technology. . .

best wishes to you and your fiance Olias!!  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

OLIAS
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Pearl city Iowa
14 posted 2001-05-09 10:23 PM


sweetsuz,

There are plenty out there, you just may have to cast your net in a different ocean. Thank you for your kind response, be well.

Sven,

Thank you kind poet, best wishes to you from Judy and I, take care my friend.

Regards to you both
Olias.

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