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Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-05-06 01:59 PM

*Gallery Special Exhibit: Selections from the First Series*

scribe of life
stir us into your story
tend to our soul
describe destiny,
obscurity into rest

see in fond rose
style of olde
tint so red
restful dry eye

flyer on deft sun
listen for dust
tour under soft soil
frost or tinder
tide
isle
fury

ode is tired
cry
truly
tune

dry eyes

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Note: The title words within refers to the fact that all of the words of this poem can be found in the letters of "butterflies don't cry". Thank you.

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

1 posted 2001-05-06 03:06 PM

john-

so good to see your work. i have missed
you! beautiful writing as always--you've
not skipped a beat or lost your touch.
take care
talk to you soon.

Amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."

JBaker515

Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 458
Dartmouth College

2 posted 2001-05-06 03:08 PM

John..
Like usual..
very creative, i loved it!!
Keep this up!! Its great!

*Jeff Baker*

"If I'm not back in 5 minutes......just wait longer!"

"You may take our lives, but you'll never take our FREEDOM!!"

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

3 posted 2001-05-06 03:46 PM

Very nice and creative!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2001-05-06 10:10 PM

John,

Stunning as always....perfect from your pen...

Lauren~

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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

5 posted 2001-05-06 10:18 PM

Sven, you are up to you ole creative self once again. Lovely and hugs to you, ME

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-05-07 02:45 AM

here again i meet you with another beautiful piece..i think the wording was very creative and i like that every poem has deep meanings about the each special poets and also is creative in each orignal way i loved it as always keep them coming my friend...

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if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-05-07 07:11 PM

Amy, thank you my friend. . .it's nice to see you back. . . even if only for a little while. . .

Jeff, thank you. . .glad that you're enjoying. . .

walker, thank you my friend. . .

Greeneyes, thank you so much. . .

ME, thought that since I was doing your Gallery poem, I'd put this one up as well. . . they go so well together. . . thank you. . .

albert, thank you. . . I do try to make each one as special and as individual as the poets I'm showing. . . glad that you enjoyed and thank you for reading. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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