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Struck By Lightning
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Struck By Lightning |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Struck By Lightning By: Noah Eaton 3/22/01 Under the gathering thick clouds of honey I stand Veiled between a veil of navy blue Thor whispers upon the watershed I look through thunderstruck eyes, dappled with a lamb’s innocent cry My heart beckons for a love to share my life with I’m in love with her ghost I step forth dancing on the prairie Arms reaching high upon the gray skies, feeling Thor’s word of power thunder against my swaying arms Setting myself to dreaming, I faint upon the reggae cabbage patches, the polka strawberry fields Embracing passions scream, loosening myself in silence to hear my soulmate’s call Lightning desires aflame my mind of drought, staring into the light A lightning strike of passion hits my heart, my girl comes swimming in my head Electrified in steaming passion, my love embraces me, sighing like the rolling thunder Speaking those three simple words, lighting the skies with desires white flash Lips meet, lightning and thunder crash against the Earth, each phenomenon resembling a joining of two souls as one Bonding under heaven, forever to love… I awaken from a groundbreaking muse, surprised to see the sun has come out Still this passion curses through my aflame body, a lovesick boy longing to hold first love to his heart While a thunderstorm of lust rumbles on deep in me A soul struck by lightning, burning in yearning… |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
In love with a ghost...I love that line. Very good expression. I like this a lot. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Mistletoe Angel, WOW now this is some dream. I'll bet someone was sad to wake up! Great, ME |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
such passion filled dreams! how well you express yourself excellent images and beautiful words. i enjoyed this one! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Dear Mistletoe What a lovely dream and your story so well told. I wish I had started writing poetry at your age. Just think where I'd be today at my age.( no I'm not telling what that is.) Keep up the good work. Love, Joyce |
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