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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-05 03:16 PM



Midnight Romance

oh darkness
velvet quilt of night
cover and caress me
in your moonlight
seduce me
in your satin sheets
yearning for you evermore
each time we meet
candle light
are your stars
in your voice
I hear guitars
your breath
is a tender wind
delicate the trace
upon my skin
it fills me up
gives me much
how I ache
for another touch
from you
I never tire
in the trance
of your desire
a slave
to your reckoning
follow I must
enchanted beckoning
so let us now
again dance
to the magic
midnight romance

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)       Shakespeare


© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
S Arthur Grey
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1 posted 2001-05-05 03:37 PM


Excellent!
very "enticing"

S Arthur

Whose Night is this, Mine or the Moon's?
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2 posted 2001-05-05 03:52 PM


enchanted beckoning...hhhmmmmmm
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3 posted 2001-05-05 09:01 PM


*sigh*. . . you know that I loved this helen. . .  

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4 posted 2001-05-05 10:20 PM


OneSlickLady~
Most enchanting !
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2001-05-06 12:27 PM


Your poem is very romantic and dreamy.
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6 posted 2001-05-08 09:29 PM


Wooo...quite the sensual write!  Truly loved this one...excellent flow, too!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

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