»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #13
»
Lost Dreams
| Open Poetry #13 |
|
Lost Dreams |
|
|
wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
Lost Dreams Void of sleep, I stare out a smeared pane of glass, Frosted of breath, As a sad rain plays upon it. Rhythmically, Tears of whispered time, Slip by unguided, Lost in direction, Left bare and unheeded, Unnoticed, They run, Then are gone, Never missed. A vision of curtained memory, Whisks away with lonely winds, Chiming through barren trees, To rest on sky reflected puddles, Of gray, Dismal and cold. As chills run light on skin, Across static fears, Swimming beneath dream time, Lightning flashes, Fades, Then is gone, Quietly. Left to ponder in dark abandoned nights, Where emotions lay dormant, Restlessly turning, Coiled dreams, In weak hibernation, Slink in the shallow of breath, As shadows unfold, Alone to ache, Yet to be awaken, Left to sleep, They slip away, Then gone, To await tomorrow. lost in thought, found in words. |
||
| © Copyright 2001 Ron Fox - All Rights Reserved | |||
SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this feels so sad...... |
||
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the night can indeed be lonely when shadows steal sleep and dreams are lost forever never to be relived. . . excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
||
|
Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Wandering........this is stunning. My compliments. You are quite the writer! "Often the test of courage is not to die but to live" |
||
|
Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This piece is well-written and expressed..and it has superb imagery..brilliant piece! Nathan |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
