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Sven
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0 posted 2001-05-04 12:43 PM


when you open the door
to her life
there are the words

the only key that you need
is the
key of understanding
and we all should have that

and when the door opens
you find that
you have discovered
a heart that speaks
of love pure and simple

when you leave
close the door behind you
but know that
you are welcome back
anytime

you don't even
have
to
knock

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2001-05-04 01:30 PM


Oh Sven ... this is just so lovely, beautiful sentiments in tribute to Inot2be ... very nicely written indeed!  

Best wishes to you both,
/Kit

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-05-04 02:18 PM


very sweetly written *s....

M

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Jamie
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3 posted 2001-05-04 02:55 PM


I have enjoyed watching these evolve..  

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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4 posted 2001-05-04 03:57 PM


To be, or not2b...LOL wonderful tribute again. How do you know everyone?
Mabel A. Dilley
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5 posted 2001-05-04 05:10 PM


This was simply sweet and endearing.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Temptress
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6 posted 2001-05-04 06:22 PM


Well done again, Sven Pen.  
inot2B
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7 posted 2001-05-04 06:45 PM


Sven, I am at a loss for words. You have honored me beyond belief. Thank you!!!!
walker
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8 posted 2001-05-04 07:05 PM


Another great one!
anonymous albert ?
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9 posted 2001-05-04 07:08 PM


such lovely words...
beautiful poem once again..
and thanks...
for questioning my little thought
into a more in depth point of view
and i liked this one alot..
keep writing sven..

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-04-2001).]

Bill Charles
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10 posted 2001-05-04 07:40 PM


Sven - you are the best writing these lovely and most meaningful poems. You are a talent that writes with caring.

Your friend,
BC

Sven
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11 posted 2001-05-05 10:48 AM


Thank you all for replying. . . I'm glad that you're all enjoying and following the series. . . these are fun to do. . .

How do I know everyone??  It's easy. . .I just read their words. . .  

inot2B, my friend. . . I'm glad that you enjoyed this. . . it's my pleasure and honor to have you as a friend. . . and I hope that you and your words will remain with us here at Passions for a long while. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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