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Open Poetry #13

Losing Eden

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-04 11:45 AM

Losing Eden

there once was an Eden garden
found in a life’s pardon
enchanted with special powers
filled with colorful word flowers
an escape from vulnerability
the sanctuary of tranquility
a home of composure
from life’s exposure
afraid, my mind always felt
this paradise would melt
and today when I went at dawn

VANISHED…………..
Eden was gone

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

1 posted 2001-05-04 11:49 AM

Now, now, just relax! I think you have found another Eden with beautiful words for you to share. ME

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-05-04 12:40 PM

I've always felt that Eden is where we are. . . and if we fear we're going to lose it. . . we will. . .

excellent Helen. . .

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JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-05-05 02:24 AM

Eden wasn't lost...just it's occupants.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2001-05-05 02:32 AM

Nice. But surely Eden isn't lost. Joyce

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