Open Poetry #13 |
Angels Touch |
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Angel's Touch With my first breath I knew Each day since, this love it grew Our souls entwined from the start Visions of you unseen filled my heart Eternal angels, they were singing A love never ending, always beginning Tenderly wrapped within the stars These pillowed dreams from afar Ageless now, as the sands of time Your angels love to forever shine A love born of the purest essence A soul is touched, merely by your presence "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ It's sooooooo good to see your smiling face here. 'Tenderly wrapped within the stars These pillowed dreams from afar' I LOVE 'pillowed dreams' ... *Hugs* Now get up here more often ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Eagle One, you have written another love filled poem. Thank you for sharing. Hugs, ME |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
I did enjoy this a lot! Well done. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is very moving verse! Kathleen Blake |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh, Eagle!!! This is fabulous!!! We should all be lucky enough to have such an angel. Very nice writing, my friend. All writing comes |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh My! B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L! You must know that I love soulmate/angel poems, and yours is perfection My library must have this!~ Take care, Melissa~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 04-08-2001).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is wonderful. I love the last line, it says it all. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Eternal angels, they were singing A love never ending, always beginning Tenderly wrapped within the stars These pillowed dreams from afar ==================== ya know....if I didnt know better... I might think this was one of those Fate & Destiny poems *S* Very lovely write of a heart and soul. beautiful cadence kissed poem Eagle poet sir Looking hard into your eyes, |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Marge ~ It’s good to be here and to be smiling ....and I’ll try to be back more often, thank you! M E ~ I thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts, take care! Trillium ~ I'm so glad you enjoyed. Kathleen ~ Thank you my friend, I always appreciate your comments. L W ~ I think that somewhere out there we all do, thank you! Melissa ~ It is an honour to be in your library PDV ~ I’m glad you found this enjoyable. Janet ~ ..and if I didn’t know better I might call myself a poet. I thank you for your kind comments my friend. "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Glad you found her |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Ageless now, as the sands of time Your angels love to forever shine A love born of the purest essence A soul is touched, merely by your presence Oh boy eddie, what a most tender render this piece is and that last stanza.....breathless *sigh* and the last line I think is purely angelic all on it's own. This my friend is devine...simply devine winged ~HUGS~ floating your way Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 04-09-2001).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Tenderly wrapped within the stars These pillowed dreams from afar" Beautiful EagleOne! Lovely sentiments, glowing with love through each line. Wonderful writing! Best wishes, /Kit |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Paula ~ Angels! Soulmates! whatever you call them, I feel I've been blessed to have found some friends who have been able to reach out and touch my soul. Tracie ~ To be able to make you breathless is an honour my friend, take care! Kit ~ So glad you enjoyed this one, 'tis wonderful to be back and to finally have something positive to post. "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Eddie, It's good to see you smiling, it's good to see you posting such inspirational work. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Eddie, I've been told so much about your poems. Now I've had the chance to see one for myself. This is a beautiful poem, so many wonderful images. Bec The past is a foreign country - they do things differently there ~ Unknown |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Eddie, as usual I am impressed by your poetry. This is so sweet and beautiful. (btw it was me who raved to Bec about your poems! ) I especially love this line: "A soul is touched, merely by your presence" Beautiful sentiment. Take care, Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is so beautiful! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Kethry ~ My smiles of late have been all to rare and indeed it feels good to be able to smile and to find some positive inspiration. I thank you, take care! Bec ~ Firstly welcome to passions, secondly thank you for the kind words. It's always a good feeling to know others find my ramblings enjoyable. Dee ~ mmm, so you've been out raving again have you Should I ask just what you've been saying? It's always a pleasure to know that you've read and enjoyed my rambling, thanks and take care! Sunshine ~ From someone who writes with such beauty as yourself, those words mean so much, thank you! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
My dear friend~ Your weaving has reached a level beyond the star kissed skies..this is beautiful and heart filled with love...your heart shines and so does your poetry. So much to say about this piece...just so few words... I can only hope you KNOW~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
OK....so I had a butterfly/blonde moment...to the library with this one...as always [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 04-14-2001).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Butterflies ~ Your words do cause me to blush my friend, and yes, sometimes words are not required, it's all about knowing! Take care! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
There is so much tenderness present in this poem. It is lovely, Eagle One. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Claire ~ No comparison to your tender weaves, I'm glad you enjoyed, thanks. "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Eddie What a wonderful poem I picked as the first one for me to read. I am now eager to read more of your beautiful work. Any poem that mentions angels always grabs my attention and I thought this was so beautifully written. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Just came back for another read ... Tender and lovely sentiments EagleOne ... Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 05-02-2001).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Eagle One, yet another wonderful piece of art has flowed from your pen sir. Beautiful sharing of the heart. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I also came back for another read, Eddie, you should bless us with more fine poetry, it's from the heart and so expressive in sincerity. Kathleen Blake |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Eddie, seems your poetry compels us to read and reread! Beautifully done, my friend. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Sue ~ I thank you for your too kind comments, take care! Kit ~ You are welcome at anytime, thanks! Gentle Spirit ~ I'm not so sure it's art but I do thank you for your valued comment, take care! Kathleen ~ As you know, from the heart is all I know, thank you, and take care! Dee ~ I've never though of my words as compelling before, Thank you friend, take care! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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