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JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

0 posted 2001-05-03 10:13 PM

You Know Who You Are

How is it you have come
to believe yourself a god
holding the final opinion
the only right way
to live another’s life
I wish you could feel what you do to her
when you speak your cowards words
in a place she only goes for peace
you’re not a man
for that would make you human
that can’t be
no heart beats within your chest

Masked Intruder

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Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

1 posted 2001-05-03 10:49 PM

Someone messed up that probably shouldn't have, neh? Serious angry words going on here, all of them emotionally direct. Spill it out, cool the hot, make them pay, then they'll rot. the old "sticks and stones" lyric might be proven wrong here, cuz the intent behind these 'words' is enough to stone someone, me thinks.

Excellent use in the department of lyrical spillage of emotions.

You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

2 posted 2001-05-04 01:51 AM

Hurrah to her suitor! LP

Day in Day out...My love for you grows.
Without you, my life would be empty. So I hold my mustard seed of faith in us.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2001-05-04 02:15 AM

Well that's really too bad. You told him though. Joyce

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

4 posted 2001-05-04 02:15 AM

Wow!!! Glad it's not me! *holding chest and feeling heartbeat*

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-05-04 07:51 AM

You put quite a lot in a few lines...quite a lot, indeed! Well done JLR...

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2001-05-04 08:07 AM

Very intense JLR ... you've captured a lot of powerful sentiments within these lines, very well written!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2001-05-04 08:11 AM

Incredible way to get it out, but that's what writings all about. *s* Well penned.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-05-04 08:58 AM

yes, writing DOES get it all out, and you just did a fine job of it!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2001-05-04 09:06 AM

Wow. Sick 'em!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2001-05-05 08:00 AM

My, the natives seem restless in response...very well said, JLR... and "others"

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

11 posted 2001-05-05 10:22 AM

JLR- too bad there are so many people like the one you described, so insensitive to others. Great poem!

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2001-05-06 10:09 PM

I hope writing this brought forth peace...

Greeneyes~

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

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