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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-05-03 05:57 PM


In a ball I found my love.
When I catch it my heart fills with joy.
When I bat I feel the force.
When I run the bases I feel strong.
I love baseball that's my game.
I earned patches in my league.
And I plan to go to baseball summer league.
I like baseball that's my game.

Please respond he's very eager to get responces

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 05-03-2001).]

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JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-05-03 06:04 PM


Very nice poem walker jr.  Ask your mom to get you your own poet name so we'll know what to call you.  I really liked your poem, used to play baseball myself, loved it, too!
RMW
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since 2001-03-21
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2 posted 2001-05-03 06:17 PM


Walker, Jr.....I REALLY like your poem. Baseball is such a wonderful game. I have three sons, and a daughter. We all love baseball. Two of my sons are pitchers. One pitched professionally. And it all started...with loving the game....and the rosin bag. Hang in there. Maybe someday you will have your own baseball card too. Bob
Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17
Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA
3 posted 2001-05-03 06:27 PM


Walker, Jr. I am so very pleased to see and read your poem. You are going to be not only a good baseball player, but a promising poet. I hope to see more of poems. Baseball is the greatest. Thank you for thinking of us who always need the sound of a young voice.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Joyce Johnson
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since 2001-03-10
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4 posted 2001-05-03 06:36 PM


A rookie baseball player and a budding poet.  You have a good start in life.  I like baseball too, but only to watch.  Have you heard of the Mariners?  They are from my state of Washington and we are all very proud of them.  Good luck to you in Little League.  Love, Joyce
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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5 posted 2001-05-06 05:01 PM


shlock* the crack of the bat


awsome poem walker son dude

latin passion
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since 2001-04-26
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6 posted 2001-05-06 05:06 PM


American League future prospect. Love the games and challenges it's presents. LP

Day in Day out...My love for you grows.
Without you, my life would be empty. So I hold my mustard seed of faith in us.

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