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Total surrender
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Total surrender |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Easily we fell in love, with fragile minds and new hearts. Simplicity stretched her hand, and you captured me with your smile. My loneliness was your allied, it pushed right towards you. Our hearts entwined, while passion played its part. We conquered solitude, Forever being together. Loving each other so much. While we promise to each other, total surrender. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Simplicity stretched her hand.... what a very love thought, indeed! |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Walker, such soft caring words you write. For you touched... ME LP He is my pen, I am but the paper he |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Nice. Very nice. "Our hearts entwined," Beautiful imagery... |
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