Open Poetry #13 |
Touches Of Love |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Touches Of Love touches of love, soft and tender gives me the message from my sender the sensitive brush of your lips holds me tightly in seductive grips never a pleasure to exist compares to one precious kiss and nothing…… could ever replace the enchanting feeling of your embrace in it’s countenance warm and sweet with one touch makes it complete "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Powerful image, so soft fingertip touch. This sent chills down my spine. LP He is my pen, I am but the paper he |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ Very, very nicely said. Enjoyed the tender touch of this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I remember love like this...nice write! |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Very seductive, this. I like it. Can almost feel it. S Arthur |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
in it’s countenance warm and sweet with one touch makes it complete Oh yes, this is seductive, very warm and soft. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is lovely, Helen. Kathleen Blake |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
nice and cozy sort of love. Joyce |
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confetti Junior Member
since 2001-04-12
Posts 33 |
You have written a beautiful poem of love. |
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