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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2001-05-03 01:27 AM



Touches Of Love

touches of love, soft and tender
gives me the message from my sender
the sensitive brush of your lips
holds me tightly in seductive grips
never a pleasure to exist
compares to one precious kiss
and nothing…… could ever replace
the enchanting feeling of your embrace
in it’s countenance warm and sweet
with one touch makes it complete

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)       Shakespeare


© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
latin passion
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1 posted 2001-05-03 01:34 AM


Powerful image, so soft fingertip touch. This sent chills down my spine. LP

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2 posted 2001-05-03 01:37 AM


OneSlickLady~
Very, very nicely said.
Enjoyed the tender touch of this one.
~*Marge*~

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JLR
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3 posted 2001-05-03 02:59 PM


I remember love like this...nice write!
S Arthur Grey
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4 posted 2001-05-03 04:45 PM


Very seductive, this.
I like it.
Can almost feel it.

S Arthur

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PoeticKnight
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5 posted 2001-05-03 05:18 PM


in it’s countenance warm and sweet
with one touch makes it complete

Oh yes, this is seductive, very warm and soft.

Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-05-03 08:11 PM


this is lovely, Helen.

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Joyce Johnson
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7 posted 2001-05-03 08:14 PM


nice and cozy sort of love. Joyce
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8 posted 2001-05-03 11:18 PM


You have written a beautiful poem of love.
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