Open Poetry #13 |
Passions Gallery: Just a Woman (who she is. . .) |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
all that she can be is who she is a mother a wife a poet a goddess the many sides of her that make up a simple, but complex, whole each side showing you things that you know and things that you never knew you can feel it when she walks in the room her presence her passion her heart her smile the parts of her that have been hidden from even herself but are slowly, surely revealed to her in the light of this new day and in the light of that new day the roles of her life come quietly together and we can see her as she always has been as she always will be Just a Woman a woman in love with herself ---------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 05-02-2001).] |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Sven...a fine tribute to a gifted individual. Bob |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I have often heard you cannot love anyone else if you do not love yourself first. A fine tribute, and a delightful presentation. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sven as always wonderful penned. (hugs)) Charisma |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice slice of character Sven...James |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Sven, thank you so much! I'm completely speechless, and completely touched.
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
perfectly you....always well done... your heart pen shines my friend... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Very lovely tribute ..you do these so well. what a blessing Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Well done, Sven. Another tribute to a fine poet. Michael Proust- |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You do it so well...again, and again and again.... |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
excellent.. amazing work.. i loved this one as always.. keep doing your caring work for our fellow poets.. keep writing..sven ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Bob, thank you. . . "gifted". . . that's a great word. . . Lady, it's something that I always say, and strive for. . . thank you my friend. . . Charisma, thank you for reading my friend. . . James, a wonderful slice of character indeed. . . thank you. . . Lauren, thank you. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . Koko, thank you my friend. . . it's a joy for me to do these. . . Michael, thank you. . . and a fine poet she is. . . Sunshine, thank you my friend. . . who knows how many I'll do before I'm through??? albert, thank you. . . I try. . . it's just my way of saying "Thanks". . . Just a Woman, I have always been amazed by the thoughtful insight that you put into your writing. . . as always, it's been my pleasure to do this for you. . . and I am glad that you enjoyed it. . . and the fact that I left you speechless makes me -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Don't stop, Magical Sven Pen. You're guiding us through another beautiful room. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful description of Just a Woman, lovely done. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Absolutely one of my favorites you write about here, Sven. I've taken more lines away from her poetry than any other, I believe. Have missed reading her lately...oh well, at least I can read about her! Thanks for this! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sven, you capture her heart so well in this. Wonderful..*s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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