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Open Poetry #13

Day By Day (my 1st haiku)

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-05-02 11:24 AM

Day by day,
Time by time,
Hour by hour,
I will be waiting
For you,
Day by day....

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-05-02 11:34 AM

I liked the read, but it doesn't fit into the definition of an haiku that I'm familiar with...however, it does seem that the rules are ever changing from what I was taught in grammar school in the dark ages. ;o}

It contains a night message, though, very nice.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2001-05-02 12:01 PM

i believe a haiku should adhere to the syllable count of 5-7-5.

but that was a nice read nevertheless...gave me a warm fuzzy feeling

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