Open Poetry #13 |
Imaging |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
To envision you, most difficult under controlling forces- of circumstance and restraint, I try not to think of chocolate when you speak, nor to feel the weight of your hair when you run your fingers through it, not to see the compassion inside eyes sweet and deep, because it might be an imagining of closeness and this liaison would be impossible at best. © 2001 Corinne Bailey |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Is it not the impossible liaisons that are most fun to think about.... Red |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Cor, Beautiful work you have here. In the worst of times, let me drift beneath the cloak of Oblivion. I favor the night as it favors me. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
What can I say! I wish I had written this! Lovely. Kathleen Blake |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
My.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ 'I try not to think of chocolate when you speak, nor to feel the weight of your hair when you run your fingers through it' Oh ... what imagery indeed ! Big WOW's here sweet poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Park, you are correct! Temptress, thank you, and how are you? Kathleen, we are almost synonomous in my mind, my Irish cousin! Bob - My...Indeed! But, my what? Marge, thank you, kind lady! Corinne |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Cor, I'm well enough..and this deserves another turn. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very...very....WOW......I liked this a lot. SEA |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Excellent Work, Corinne... Regards, Sudhir |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I read your posts and feel I was born 30 years too soon ~G~ you and your SO - are 2 most fortunate people - Nothing I'd like more than to inspire such beautiful poetry - |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Felt this...deeply. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I've dreamt of impossible liaisons at times... damn fine dreams they were too. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
To envision or not to envision... Such a question perhaps cannot be answered... Nice one, Corinne... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
SEA, thank you! Temptress - thank you for the bump! Sudhir, thanks! Bill - you are the sweetest man - thank you! *S* JLR - thanks! Park, nothing wrong with dreaming, is there? Nan, thank you! |
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