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every shadow's grace
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every shadow's grace |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I've got this paintbox filled with tubes some are half-squeezed some unused... cadmium and brushes stiff the waste of haste no artist's thrift-- a pallet in rainbow's abuse I've got this paintbox filled with you. Linseed, always, beckoning in greed to capture reckoning and every stroke should be mohair to capture smoke--of barely there-- a whisper of a portraiture the curl--unfurl--of lines of her... each stroke the rubbing of the lamp and magick dancing artist trance. I know every shadow's grace, the etchings of the chiseled face-- I know where each star should be placed inflection of reflection's dance. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful phrasing Serenity ... this just sang to me! It's been so long since I've worked on canvas, I'm afraid I've forgotten how. These words have given me a taste for it again, and powerfully! I promised myself a year ago I'd set up a studio after my move and still haven't done it. My oils, Magick White and Linseed Oil are calling ... this weekend perhaps. Mind if I print this to inspire me? Loved this Serenity, and thank you!!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
great, now paint us a beautiful poem just like this one! Kathleen Blake |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
a pallet in rainbow's abuse I've got this paintbox filled with you. ======================= to capture smoke--of barely there-- a whisper of a portraiture the curl--unfurl--of lines of her... each stroke the rubbing of the lamp and magick dancing artist trance. I know every shadow's grace, the etchings of the chiseled face-- I know where each star should be placed inflection of reflection's dance. ======================== yer so  this poem is so cool, the phrasing, the imagery, the clever rhyme scheme you paint a portrait of your heart with your words in a poem about painting... like I said...COOL ... way cool baby  I miss you so much I cant stand it |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
pull out the colors. . . and show us the stars. . . love this one. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
wow this is so amazing, i can't believe how talented you are when it comes to writing, it all rhymes perfectaly and the story makes so much sense, as always a lovely creation Kindly, |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
serenity, really really loved this little piece. Just love you little paintbox.  Parker |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
wonderfully written, enjoyed muchly. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ The title is as intriguing as the poem ! I really enjoyed this. Think I'll make some time to dabble on the canvas tonight. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This is what you do K. And you do it everytime. Every shadow's grace,...my, that in itself sends my mind in a twirl. Love your lines lady. *Peace you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serenity--This poem makes me wish I could paint...you have made it sound so inviting, even though a metaphor, and well done too. A wonderful poem! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Loved this, Serenity, excellent write! -Tier |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Wanted to pop in to thank everyone for reading...been a busy little bee lately...too tired today to even get a buzz...lol...but thanks to all for your generous replies and to all you artists out there? I would truly love to see your work some time!!! HUGS to forum, with love. |
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