Open Poetry #13 |
Your love is like chunky peanut butter |
Masked Intruder
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
(Thanks to Just A Woman for asking the question, and Packratmike for answering it. *grins*) Your love is like chunky peanut butter Encaging me from head to toe In a sticky sweetness like no other, Moving over my tongue in slowmotion alacrity, Tingling my tastebuds with fullness And sweetness, candor and fidelity. PS: And since she insisted, I'll just go ahead and dedicate this one to Serenity. *Mischevious Grins* [This message has been edited by Masked Intruder (edited 05-01-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh now. Be honest. I did not insist. I just sort of stuck to the roof of your mouth! yer so sweet...perfect with peanut butter! |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Okay, okay. She didn't insist, more like begged. HEHEHE |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
That's right. She begged. Take me, baby, butter knife and spread me smooth on bread of white gently now undo the chunks take me--I will be your lunch! naughty me! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
sometimes we all find ourselves in stickly situations, sounds like your sticking to it babe. great poem. |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Another poet meets the challenge.....good job MI. Mike |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I think this is the best one of this challenge I have read yet. I like what you've done here, hon. |
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