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Masked Intruder
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0 posted 2001-05-01 11:41 PM


(Thanks to Just A Woman for asking the question, and Packratmike for answering it. *grins*)

Your love is like chunky peanut butter
Encaging me from head to toe
In a sticky sweetness like no other,
Moving over my tongue in slowmotion alacrity,
Tingling my tastebuds with fullness
And sweetness, candor and fidelity.

PS: And since she insisted, I'll just go ahead and dedicate this one to Serenity. *Mischevious Grins*

[This message has been edited by Masked Intruder (edited 05-01-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-05-01 11:59 PM


Oh now. Be honest. I did not insist. I just sort of stuck to the roof of your mouth!  
yer so sweet...perfect with peanut butter!

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2 posted 2001-05-02 12:02 PM


Okay, okay.  
She didn't insist, more like begged. HEHEHE

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3 posted 2001-05-02 12:25 PM


That's right. She begged.

Take me, baby, butter knife
and spread me smooth on bread of white
gently now undo the chunks
take me--I will be your lunch!

naughty me!

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4 posted 2001-05-02 12:28 PM


sometimes we all find ourselves in stickly situations, sounds like your sticking to it babe. great poem.
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5 posted 2001-05-02 02:16 AM


Another poet meets the challenge.....good job MI.

Mike

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6 posted 2001-05-02 08:40 PM


I think this is the best one of this challenge I have read yet. I like what you've done here, hon.  


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