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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2001-05-01 11:35 PM

Sometimes my mind races
to voice the
feelings kept within

My words cannot express
the thoughts that
flood me with energy

Each time I reach
to pull you near

To memorize your
face and just
for a moment

Not hear you but,
feel instead

A heart in trust ed
to you, is
complete

Night time
remembers

One more
day is finished

One
more chance
to tell you

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World Is Ever Really Lost.
All Things Beloved Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-05-01 11:43 PM

Beutiful poem of love...be grateful!

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

2 posted 2001-05-01 11:44 PM

love endures all, for they journey together. LP

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-05-02 02:54 AM

What a beautiful love poem so glad I went looking for you when I came in, just lovely!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-05-02 08:12 AM

Sometimes all we need is another chance!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-05-02 08:55 AM

Sometimes my mind races
to voice the
feelings kept within

My words cannot express
the thoughts that
flood me with energy

Each time I reach
to pull you near

To memorize your
face and just
for a moment

Not hear you but,
feel instead
===================

and poetry allows us to release those feelings, to give them voice..
and your poetic voice speaks volumes to me...
but always in a gentle whisper.
love the fragility of this feather-light write.

I miss you so much I cant stand it
Seems like my heart is breaking in two
My head says no, but my soul demands it
Everything I do reminds me of you

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2001-05-02 10:41 AM

enjoy

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2001-05-02 11:08 AM

as always lady, beautiful. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-05-02 01:01 PM

this is beautiful Lauren. . .

thankful for those days. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

9 posted 2001-05-02 05:26 PM

"Not hear you but,
feel instead"

Very well said, my friend. This is lovely, Lauren.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

10 posted 2001-05-02 06:40 PM

Superb!!! So many favorite lines in this, vivid, romantic, tender!

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