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The Eddy Effect
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The Eddy Effect |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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The Eddy Effect She has seen you only in shadows, a spiraling, concaved guise of self, one of many. She hungers for more than this sisterly love, she wants to experience the lover in you. Dodging her desires as best you can, trying to keep it friendly, you are, after all dependent on her. A maddening, nonreciprocal cycle, your wish for freedom, her schemes to make you stay. © 2001 Corinne Bailey |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
My goodness. This was both wonderfully written and very powerfilled. You know how to write the perfect poem: intricate and exacting, producing a snapshot in time. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sweet little sixteen more than a friend? o yuh! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is nice. I don't understand fully, but I don't need to to appreciate the poetry. Joyce |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Julian, you are too kind, thank you! Walt - you nut! Joyce - thank you! Corinne |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I know this lady, I think I even dated her.  Park |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Great poem! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I really enjoyed these lines, wow, Corinne, nice job. Kathleen Blake |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Well, there certainly is intrigue behind that half smiled squint! Very interesting piece. Enjoyed it. S Arthur |
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