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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Diamonds shining brightly pale in comparison to the love light that sparkles from your eyes. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Precious Rubies Deep red luster Color of deep passion Captures in a gem emotion, For wear. I like short formed poetry and you did this well. Gloom |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
and we all like diamonds. I love it pales in comparison. "sigh" |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Sapphires sweet colored stones sexy seduction set stir me to an ice breeze so cool salving [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 05-01-2001).] |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
Masterful form. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Well done. Joyce |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is perfect. . . just perfect GS. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Lovely! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all for your energetic and lovely replies! I love the short forms like these cinquains and haikus. I appreciate you all taking the time to read and respond. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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