Open Poetry #13 |
You and Me, Me and You - My Teddy Bear |
latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
You and Me Me and You The only one for me is you. You've felt my tears absorbed them well-- You've heard my unspoken pleas, and prayers. You've been there since I was a little girl, and watched me grow. I've haven't perfected being who I am, As I embarked on each and every journey. But now that I'm older, and somewhat wiser. I can't discard you threads shreaded and sadly woren. I know I need to go on a new venture and buy a new bear to hug-- to absorb my tears and hear my pleas. I need to hug and snuggle one so warm, so I can whisper all my secrets to, not in discord, for I know you won't tell. How I can't bring myself to replace you, for you are dear to my heart. You've brought me from my darkness into daylight. To start afresh to dawns new light. Come let me hug you... |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is darling. I have my doll from childhood. Joyce |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is wonderful! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
How pretty! |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is very sweet. I have still a teddy bear that an ex boyfriend gave me. Fuzzy and I've been through so much together that I doubt I can ever bear to give him up. Dawn |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LatinPassion~ Reminiscent nostalgic moments~ Wonderfully done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
I attempted this past Sunday to find a new bear to hug. To say, I walked out of several store empty handed. For none stood out that could take "Teddie" place. I plan to make a Bear room, and of course there will be a place of honor to Teddie. I know some of you are going "Ahh, come on - it's a girl thing." no, ask your parents - we all hold something dear to us. So to all -- thank your reading my poem and bring back memories whether happy or sad - Teddies and dolls alike will be there. Joyce~dolls that is another story - please do write. Irish Rose~ Again, I admire rose in and given name. Thank you - your wonderful. DawnG~Hugs especially to you. Fuzzy,hears all. Hugs back to you. Marge~MUCHO GRACIAS, MI AMIGA, GRACIAS, GRACIAS. Sometime I'll tell that story as well. XX()()() and a big hug to BC. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
latin passion - soft, tender, nice...... BC |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
sweet memories....love this.... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
How cute...why would you even try to replace him? btw---what is the 'k' poem in your response to me? |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
~~Greeneyes~~ softness speaks so sweetly, thank you to you. ~~JLR* Could not replace even if I tried! ~~BC~~ - my all, for I know you're there beside me, steadfast and supportive. thank you sweet one~~ LP Day in Day out...My love for you grows. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
i remember my little teddy bear that i wouldnt let my mom discard and it was pretty worn out but i loved it so |
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