Open Poetry #13 |
Three Little Words |
latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
I am sorry... For this is hard for me to say. Much less to say I love you-- Because these three words go unsaid. Yet they are spoken by many, But are they really true? They intertwine together, but are they really abused? So, when I say these three little words, they aren't to be taken lightly. I am sorry, so very sorry, for the harm I've done. Please,come weave your life with mine, for the words are from my heart, I'll come saying -- I love you, with open arms. Make a memory by touching someone you love ~ for time stands not still. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! We hope you take time to look around, become acquainted, and enjoy your new home! Karilea |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Thank you Sunshine - I hope to stay. I have enjoyed reading many poems offering me solitude and peace. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family. This poem is so true.. I never fail to say these words when they are needed.. it's not wrong to admit that you've made a mistake. "I'm sorry" can begin the healing process.... I look forward to reading more from you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
LP, one should never be afraid to say those three little words, or to say I'm sorry. Welcome to passions, enjoy your stay. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a very nice beginning *s ~Wynter..enjoy your stay "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
nakdthoughts ~ thank you for your gentle remarks. Gentle Spirit ~ Thank you for a place of solitude and reading. I enjoy your poems. Poet DeVine~ Your kind words of encouragement, is what I need right now. I am placing stepping stones in what I hope will start the healing process of what we once had. Thank you...LP |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sweet words,thanks for sharing! |
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Amuse_mi Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 110 |
This is really beautiful. Saying your sorry is one of the greatest gifts you can give. But a really wise friend I repect and admire once told me you cannot expect anything back. It is up to the other person to forgive. What they (he/she) does with the apology is out of your control. It certainly hurts, though, if it is thrown back in your face. [This message has been edited by Amuse_mi (edited 04-29-2001).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A lovely poem. Welcome to our pages. "I love you" and "I'm sorry" are phrases that are easy for some and hard for others, but they should always be said with sincerity. Joyce |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
The words are only a vehicle - the actions should back them up, but you know something? Sometimes it's all we have to start with, enjoyed this very much. Kathleen Blake |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is beautiful in its sincerety... its intentions are lovely Welcome to Poetry Land... and may I add that I dont think in my year plus here,-- I have ever seen a poet give so many replies before posting a poem... thats very cool!! Nice to have you here... I look forward to more of your poetry. take care jm There are two lasting bequests |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you so much for your lovely words that speak so much truth. Too many people use those "three little words" far too lightly. Welcome! Take care........Sue Suetang |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Welcome and I must tell you that your words, all of them I find very true to my own heart. Well done! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Those two sets of 3 little words can either be space-fillers used without meaning... or they can mean everything. *S* I like this very much... it leads to some interesting thoughts. *S* Welcome to Passions! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
latin passion - words of caring you write. "So, when I say these three little words, they aren't to be taken lightly. I am sorry, so very sorry, for the harm I've done. Please,come weave your life with mine, for the words are from my heart, I'll come saying -- I love you, with open arms." I write these......... 'Just three little words, I listen and hear them. Sorrow I hear, but need not be, for a warm heart still needs thee... 'My life will weave with yours, words coming too, from my depths. Hush, for whispered words you will hear, but only three, "I Love You".... BC |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Wonderful poem. Seems that these words are sometimes hidden or lost. You have written very nicely..I enjoyed the read |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Welcome, you will find peace here along with many wonderful talents and people....this is beautiful.... be well.... Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
love this, very nice writing, and yes writing is a good way to find peace...seems us poets do a lot of that searching stuff best wishes and welcome |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
welcome... i do sometimes wonder if such words "im sorry" have lost their meaning but after reading this thread, i guess i am not alone in thinking so--that others still care about how they use these words... interesting poem...and may you enjoy your stay here |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions, with this wonderful entrance. three little words straith from the heart, worth more than anything else. Charisma |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Welcome and good luck!! |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
~~Sunshine* an overdue thank you comes your way. ~~Poet DeVine* A warm respectful thank you for you kind comments. ~~Gentle Spirit* how fitting a name, your words are to kind. ~~ Nakdthoughts* Thank you ~~ Walker* such SW, I thank you for your kind remarks. ~~Amuse_mi* It does hurt -- but she can accept it is not declined. ~~Irish Rose** I agree-- in taking words that are intangible assets, apply action; creats the reaction; acceptance or rejection. Getting to deep. ty ~~ J. Marie* thank you learning, my pend holder only but quides me. ~~Sue Tang* Agree! thank you. ~~Suthern - so three a statement- you and I.Rose must think alike. ~~Alan - thank you! ~~Greeneyes* Most humbled** ~~Jelly Beans* 3 on a string - great minds think alike. ~~Faterider* warm thank you. ~~Charisma * so kind, most appreciative thank you comes your way. ~~Inot2B * You Bet!! With that comment, I say thank you all for I'm overwhelmed with your gestures and comments. LP Day in Day out...My love for you grows. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
No I didn't forget.... Wanted a clean sheet of paper for this. ~~BC~~ here it is already a week past, to be exact 9 days. When I first read your acceptance and then to forgive (next); when God made you above, little did he realize what a diamond he created. I've said to you before, a gem you are. So, giving, so giving...for you give everyone your all. Pride is a very humbling experience if one has never experienced it. It is refreshing and cleansing of the soul. I stand ready... I've said it, feel it... for they are not just words... LP Day in Day out...My love for you grows. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
this was enjoyed deeply by me |
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