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Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2001-03-27 01:46 PM

Hello Passions...it's been a while huh? Well I'm just letting y'll know that I'm still here....I'm gonna give y'll something pretty today cause, it's been a while since y'll read a pretty poem from me...enjoy!!

Last night, I saw angels in the sky,
flying on golden wings way up high
as their presence, produced an aurora,
that shined and sparkled like water.

There was four black and white angels
singing on a beautiful, glowing rainbow
as they sang songs in their soprano voices,
songs of love, peace, happiness, and rejoice.

It was absolutely one of the best times of my life,
as my happiness shined vibrantly through the night.
I wished that the night would never end or cease
because never before, have I found so much peace.

Throughout the night, the four, beautiful angels sang and sang away,
but when the earth opened her eyes, the angels silently faded away.

[This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (edited 03-27-2001).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-03-27 01:57 PM

Nate~ this is beautiful.....good job on the pretty!

I enjoyed

SEA

Jellybean King
Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 153
Jelly, Bean

2 posted 2001-03-27 02:18 PM

Gorgeous descriptions! The reader gets a sense of how private and inspiring the moment is, because...

"when the earth opened her eyes, the angels silently faded away."

...it's like this was a private moment only to be shared with the viewer and reader. Thanks for sharing!

Jellybean King

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

3 posted 2001-03-27 03:16 PM

Looks like we're both back..hope you plan to stay for awhile too!

~D
Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-03-27 03:22 PM

hi Nate, loved reading your come back poem..

((hugs))
Charisma

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

5 posted 2001-03-27 04:38 PM

Nate, you have done good and given us a small look of between dark and light of day. You paint a pretty picture. ME

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

6 posted 2001-03-27 05:13 PM

"Throughout the night, the four, beautiful angels sang and sang away,
but when the earth opened her eyes, the angels silently faded away."

Now I know why so many want to stay in bed so late. Who'd want to wake up when they have all that beautiful music being sung.
You have out done yourself.

Every minute you are angry, you lose 60 seconds of happiness.
- Ralph Waldo Emerson

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-03-27 06:18 PM

Enjoyed reading your poem Nate...James

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-03-27 06:31 PM

you know something Nate??? we need more pretty poems from you. . .

welcome back my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

9 posted 2001-03-27 11:24 PM

Wow, thanks for all the wonderful responses....
Thank you Sea, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Thank you Jellybeans, for describing from a unique perspective.
Thank you Devina and welcome back!
Thank you Charisma for replying.
Thank you ME for realizing what I was talking about.
Thank you Jimmy, for reading.
Thank you Inot, for quoting me.
Thank you Sven for your nice comments...maybe I will give Passions more pretty poem..I certainly have some stashed away......peace everyone!

Nathan

Jamie
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since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

10 posted 2001-03-28 12:48 PM

yanno... this is pretty

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2001-03-28 01:01 AM

Nate, my friend~
Yes .... you nailed it !
But ... maybe it's beyond pretty~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

12 posted 2001-03-28 01:18 AM

I thought this was just lovely and it is always nice to mention angels in a poem, I know I have many times. Thank you......Sue

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

13 posted 2001-03-28 03:04 AM

sweet descriptions... the words here help to take away that "you had to be there feeling"... cause these words really paint the picture!

a beautiful vision.

You gotta love livin, cause dyin's a pain in the ass.
- Frank Sinatra

"It don't mean a thing
if it ain't got that swing."

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

14 posted 2001-03-28 11:09 AM

Thank you Ethan, Marge, Suetang and Jamie, for your wonderful comments!!!

Nathan

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

15 posted 2001-04-27 01:22 AM

Ah Nathan...your angels were there when you needed them to be...such a glorious sight they were....

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