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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-05-01 05:10 AM

Lost In Time

With music to drown out my thoughts
and the moon watching overhead
memories began to lose their meaning.

I gave my heart to the breeze
and painted over myself in new,
allowing nothing to interfere in time.

Constant are my thoughts, always
words to pacify me, cleanse,
healing the self-esteem:

"I am sometimes in awe of my acomplishments
while always knowing, my best is still to come
and I rest, assured in tomorrow, that will be."

With each stroke, I cover my anger,
my hurt streaking for one more coating,
tears wetting the wet, waiting to dry.

The air warms, touches my cheeks, dries the tears
as my eyes seek out the old beneath,
as another layer is placed on top.

Traffic drones by, a blending buzz,
a humming in tune, as my mind recalls the words
and my voice sings out what use to be.

The phone rings, the hammers pound
busses unload, as this day begins it's end
and I hear nothing but my past,

See nothing but my future and
in my present, I am in between,
and lost in time...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2001-05-01 05:39 AM

The complexity of peeling away layers makes for good poetry, I am only sorry I felt that this was the basis of this piece which was very well done. Thank you for a good read.

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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-05-01 07:17 AM

Hi, well this sounds like the same place I am living. You did this beautifully.
Sandra

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-05-01 07:34 PM

but you'll find your way back into time. . .

love the images here Wynter. . . excellent. . .

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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2001-05-01 08:30 PM

Wynter - I am of the past, present, and future. Name the time, and I will meet you there.

BC

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-05-01 09:19 PM

Wynter~
A lovely longing write~

*BillCharles~
That's the neatest reply !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-05-01 09:21 PM

a good friend reminded me of those in-between moments, and remember in-between rhymes with Maureen and Kathleen!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-05-01 10:58 PM

Mysteria
thank you for reading and commenting..yes I am painting my home and renewing my

Sandra
nice to see you sweetie and thank you..yes I am bouncing off the walls again

Sven
nice response thank you Sven ((huggzzz))

BC
"I am of the past, present, and future. Name the time, and I will meet you there"... how about this weekend in Vancouver

Marge
yup..you got that right...I get more longing all the time , thank you...hope your work place gets settled soon. And isn't Bill neat...he's just as "neat" in person, too

Kathleen
You always bring a ~smile to my face ..thank you

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

8 posted 2001-05-01 11:59 PM

you are the past, present and future. Each day brings new light. BC stated correctly, anytime and place. LP

Coal Surrender
Member

since 2001-04-01

Posts 84
U.S.

9 posted 2001-05-03 07:42 AM

Always a pleasure reading you, no exception here, rewarding as usual.

Coal

PoeticKnight
Senior Member

since 2000-01-20

Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

10 posted 2001-05-03 09:06 AM

I feel lost in time myself all the time. Nice poem Maureen.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

11 posted 2001-05-04 09:32 AM

You can never be lost as long as you write like this

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2001-05-04 09:58 AM

latin passion
I look for that new light each day...sometimes i forget to pay my electric bills.....and I sit in the dark.
Yes, Bill is a "sweetheart"

Coal
thank you very much for responding so kindly to me, I do appreciate it

PK,
there you go peeking again into my life
"lost in time myself" does help to daydream I guess...

Interloper
You again *s...worth a smile to me..huggzzzz

Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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