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Open Poetry #13

can't hold on . . .

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

0 posted 2001-05-01 12:41 PM

wind blows

     sails billow

          but I can't hold on . . .

     sometimes sails are filled

          from want

               yet snatch away the bark




S Arthur

Whose Night is this, Mine or the Moon's?
J.E.James

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latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

1 posted 2001-05-01 12:47 PM

I know what you mean - poetically correct. (LP)

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2001-05-01 12:52 PM

enjoyed these words...

Greeneyes~

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost.

All Things Beloved Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

3 posted 2001-05-01 08:12 PM

you can hold on.....i'll help you....just say the word.....helen

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-05-06 06:52 PM

hang in there!!!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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