Open Poetry #13 |
Haiku |
Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
The sun sets again And I think of your soft smile Knowing I am loved The sun rises now And I feel your warmth near me You know I love you passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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painted lady Junior Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 48on the wing or nectaring |
Nice soft and warm pair! Sunsets and sunrises are good haiku generators. And then my heart with pleasure fills, |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely little Haiku's. Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (edited 04-30-2001).] |
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windwarrior_RJ Junior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 28California |
very lovely RJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
These are excellent PV. . . really like them. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
soft tender feel to them...write on! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
like this |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Very nice sentiments expressed well. |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
Thanks to everyone that has replied, I appreciate your comments. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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