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Imitations Of Eden
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Imitations Of Eden |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Imitations Of Eden By: Noah Eaton 4/28/01 Eve reigns as queen in my world Surrounding me in her Utopian gardens Adam sighs within me, guiding me to this dream girl To her palace in my desires mountains She frolics freely among the miles of flowers Playing with her nature friends under the rainbows Smiling and giggling with delight, with a youthful shower Singing with the birds, dancing and spinning in circles Her soft long brown hair flinging freely in the wind Sapphire eyes tearing with joy, glowing like novas Soft red ruby lips smiling as happy as can be in high spirits A beautiful goddess body warming with pure love How she naturally makes my heart beat faster when I’m close to her Watching her eyes stare into mine, knowing she too loves me She stands naked before me, screaming in pure rapture I welcome my Eve into my arms, kissing her passionately At last I hold her, climbing aboard her magic unicorn ride Soaring off into the soft blue skies to her palace Kissing her all the way there, feeling her warm breath tingle my neck, feeling my heart light Feeling butterflies flutter in my heart, with hers to mine, in attached lips Now I sleep at night in heaven, with her head beside mine Crying in joy hearing her moan in her sleep, as I have my hand massaging her smooth velvet backside In the candlelight I can see her shine beautifully, glowing with happiness I wake up in the morning to look into her beautiful eyes, as she opens hers and smiles in bliss Forever I will frolic in the meadows with her, holding her hands in loves dance Laughing and smiling with her, becoming one together in heavenly prance The day I fell in love, these Imitations Of Eden swimming throughout my head Eve moans within me now, the wife of my heart dreaming beside me in Eden’s bed |
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windwarrior_RJ Junior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 28California |
This was a nicely written romance. thanks, RJ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, I JUST wrote a poem on the theme of Eve. I swear I wrote it before I read this lol. Yours is much more extensive, and you have put beautiful visions within. I'm going to post mine anyway, just because its the first one I have felt inclined to write for awhile. Sorry about the similarity. Sandra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
No need to apologize Sandra! (smiles) After all, we all have a little bit of Eden in all of us! I am so very happy you wrote a poem about Eve too, please post it! (smiles) Can't wait to read it! Thank you both for your beautiful comments! Love, Noah Eaton |
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