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The Eagles Flight
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The Eagles Flight |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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You awaken me in dreams with unspoken words with this flight you are the wind beneath my wings My being remembers the essence, the experience of un bound less love a knowledge of true self To my lost soul a home, the tracks of the sky reveal your image, to watch in silver springs as we dance Expand your wings and fly Your innocence breath taking, a symbol of my peace As I take the adventure and float on the wind with you, the beauty leaves me speechless The experience leaves me forever-changed, nature, life in harmony once again, & Once again I soar with you In Dear Memory ************** "Though my soul may sit in darkness, It will arise in perfect light. I have loved the stars too fondly To be fearful of the night". -Author Unknown *************** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 04-27-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this touches my heart.....  SO beautiful SEA |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
another example of GreenEyes writing as no other can write- - and leaving us to scramble for adequate words of praise and admiration (to my treasure box ) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
You put it all together and out came something beautiful my friend... jwesley |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You have expressed a remarkable sensation...well done GreenEyes... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You awaken me in dreams with unspoken words with this flight you are the wind beneath my wings My being remembers the essence, the experience of un bound less love a knowledge of true self To my lost soul a home, the tracks of the sky reveal your image, to watch in silver springs as we dance =========================== the love lingers ever on..and its spirit can be found and felt in many places... equal to the warm sun on our skin. this is so serene and spiritually beautiful Lauren... you capture inner peace like few can.... and then you pass it on  Thank you for the sweet card...I sent a note of thanks...but it came back undelivered... I guess the site is having tech probs... thank you also for the share of the signature quote... thank you for being you  take care gentle poetess jm Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Lauren, this is lovely...I love poems about eagles Kathleen Blake |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Lauren, this is wonderful. . . just beautiful. . . you've captured this very well here. . . the words just seem to rise and fall like that flight. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Lovely thoughts you've shared from your heart. 'Your innocence breath taking, a symbol of my peace' YES ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Greeneyes, you have produced a magnificent work of art in this one!! Bravo, my friend!! I live in eagle country...thousands of them migrate here every winter.........you captured their splendor..............  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I enjoyed the read but I have some questions. E-mail me if you wish. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very beautiful. Joyce |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - your pen takes from the depts of your heart, and transposes it into sensitive words that I have read. You are a most magnificent poet. BC |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a wonderful jouney of reflection, once again thank you for sharing. Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Lauren, This is truly lovely, my friend. Such pretty imagery. Thank you for this one. Michael Proust- |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lauren.....beautiful. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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thecraig Member
since 2001-03-11
Posts 223 |
A lovely shared flight |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
SEA~ you have touched mine with your reply, thank you Bill~ your compliments are always of the highest greatness....you have been a great supporter, thank you always.... jwesley~ my friend i thank you kindly... Sunshine~ thank you my friend, I appreciate you saying that... Janet Marie~ you always speak from your heart in words and replies, I thank you for sharing your time reading and responding to this... Though my soul may sit in darkness, It will arise in perfect light. For I have loved the stars too fondly ... To be fearful of the night. ******** it looks good with you Irish Rose~ thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.... Sven~ you make me smile dear friend...thank you for sharing your thoughts with me..... Marge~ from my heart to yours, thank you always... Sunnyone~ ahhh to be where you live...i'd be close to heaven....have always wanted to live there, but have never even been.....I love how you speak of alaska....thank you my friend for telling me, and for letting me peek at a little piece of where you live..... VAS~ I am very grateful you stopped in, thank you... Joyce~ thank you for reading and responding in kind... Bill C~ you humble me with your words, from my heart i thank you for always being so thoughtful... Mysteria~ I love how you put that a "reflection", thank you my friend... Michael~ you have always been so kind....I enjoy so much your replies....thanks dear friend...  Gentle Spirit~ thank you D....always, always, always... thecraig~ thank you, I appreciate you... so thankful for passions and the poets who inspire and share their thoughts for all to read....from my heart to you all....thank you Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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