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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 2001-04-30 10:47 AM


In my darkest hour
Of solitary revelry
The time alone
Helps me to be free
The years are all misty
Now that you are here
And living without you
Is the only thing I fear
I am all that I am
Because you took my hand
Without your love
I alone, cannot stand


© Copyright 2001 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
inot2B
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1 posted 2001-04-30 10:57 AM


You have looked into my heart and soul and found my greatest fear, to lose the love of my life.

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2001-04-30 11:03 AM


"I am all that I am
Because you took my hand"

........so romantic......so very very soft and sweet.....wow.....

Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-04-30 11:04 AM


Laying your heart in one's hands...the greatest gift...the greatest trust...
Ethan Halo
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4 posted 2001-04-30 11:05 AM


right to the heart of the matter... excuse the pun...
very straight. i like it very much. and i know just what ya mean... don't we all
*sigh*

"Many great relationships start or end in a bar.
Some of the best do both in the course of an evening."

JLR
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5 posted 2001-04-30 11:24 AM


You have written my heart also...though, for me, the fear became the reality.  Thank you for this!
Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-04-30 11:29 AM


The time alone
Helps me to be free
The years are all misty
Now that you are here
And living without you
Is the only thing I fear
I am all that I am
Because you took my hand
Without your love
I alone, cannot stand
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this is classic PK...
poetically sweet, succinct, understated, romantic, cadence kissed perfection.
what more can a fan ask for..
(other than MORE)  

There are two lasting bequests
that we can hope to instill in our children
one is roots ...
the other ... wings.

PoeticKnight
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7 posted 2001-04-30 11:53 AM


inot2b - I hope you don't ever realize that fear.

SEA - "Wow" to you too as always. *S* Thanks.

Sun - I agree totally, you always see the little things so well. Thank you for that.

Ethan - Pun excused *S*. Thank you.

JLR - I'm sorry to hear that, I know how you feel.

JM - Thanks as always for your cadence-kissed replies.



Sven
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8 posted 2001-04-30 12:53 PM


we know how this is don't we???

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

PoeticKnight
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9 posted 2001-04-30 01:01 PM


Thank you Sven. I know that you must know, my friend.
latin passion
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10 posted 2001-04-30 03:44 PM


For perfect love casth out all fear.... 3:16
LP

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2001-04-30 05:04 PM


Some of us don't want to stand alone...although we can...we want to share our love...well said...James
vandana
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12 posted 2001-05-01 10:39 AM


like this
PoeticKnight
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13 posted 2001-05-01 10:44 AM


Thank you to all.
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