Open Poetry #13 |
Without Your Love |
PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
In my darkest hour Of solitary revelry The time alone Helps me to be free The years are all misty Now that you are here And living without you Is the only thing I fear I am all that I am Because you took my hand Without your love I alone, cannot stand |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You have looked into my heart and soul and found my greatest fear, to lose the love of my life. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I am all that I am Because you took my hand" ........so romantic......so very very soft and sweet.....wow..... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Laying your heart in one's hands...the greatest gift...the greatest trust... |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
right to the heart of the matter... excuse the pun... very straight. i like it very much. and i know just what ya mean... don't we all *sigh* "Many great relationships start or end in a bar. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
You have written my heart also...though, for me, the fear became the reality. Thank you for this! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The time alone Helps me to be free The years are all misty Now that you are here And living without you Is the only thing I fear I am all that I am Because you took my hand Without your love I alone, cannot stand ============================== this is classic PK... poetically sweet, succinct, understated, romantic, cadence kissed perfection. what more can a fan ask for.. (other than MORE) There are two lasting bequests |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
inot2b - I hope you don't ever realize that fear. SEA - "Wow" to you too as always. *S* Thanks. Sun - I agree totally, you always see the little things so well. Thank you for that. Ethan - Pun excused *S*. Thank you. JLR - I'm sorry to hear that, I know how you feel. JM - Thanks as always for your cadence-kissed replies. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
we know how this is don't we??? excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thank you Sven. I know that you must know, my friend. |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
For perfect love casth out all fear.... 3:16 LP |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Some of us don't want to stand alone...although we can...we want to share our love...well said...James |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
like this |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thank you to all. |
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