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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
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NEW ENGLAND, USA

0 posted 2001-04-29 07:48 PM


"Charity begins at Home"
Or is that true these days?
Is it just where our hats are hung
'Fore we go our separate ways?

It seems the Family suffers
Not sharing a common meal,
Each one on a different schedule
Too busy to share how we feel.

And in Survival's interest
The kids by others are kept,
Two paychecks seem so important
Tho' the Day Care's are proven innept!

Home to an empty dwelling
The Latch-Key kids do come,
Wonder why there's behavioral problems
And why they oft' seem so dumb?

Let Charity begin at Home
Let Parents both agree,
To be there for their Family
As a Top Priority!

For when Love begins at Home
It's rippling effects, we will see,
To generate a lot of Good
And Bless our society.

No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

© Copyright 2001 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2001-04-29 08:07 PM


David, this is wonderfully written and so very true. Priorities are what is needed..
ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
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2 posted 2001-04-29 09:20 PM


Yes, this is so true.  Pursuit of material gains has ruined many lives.  Sometimes Mother must work but if at all possible, she shoud be home thos formative years. Well done. Joyce
Amuse_mi
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since 2001-04-22
Posts 110

3 posted 2001-04-29 10:25 PM


I don't necessarily agree with the comments, but....

I agree with the poem, nice piece.

[This message has been edited by Amuse_mi (edited 04-29-2001).]

Nan
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4 posted 2001-04-30 07:31 AM


AMEN


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