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The Love is gone
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The Love is gone |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I may have been wrong to give my heart away But I thought she was here to stay Cause she told me that she loved me She must have lied cause she has went away Was my love too cold to fill her needs? I told her that she was what I needed When she held me tight my world seemed so bright She told me that I was the only person she needed To me she was heaven sent When she held me in her arms I thought it was a blessed event Seems now that is was just A breach of trust with fraudulent intent I made her the most important item in my life I would have given up my world if she ‘d been my wife But seems that was just more wasted time She has stolen my heart and went out of my life It seems she had it all planned Now I feel like a used cigar band Used and discarded because I was no longer needed My world has gone from grand to bland The hard part is that I don’t know what I have done This old world has lost all its fun Even the sun has hid it face When I go out at night even the stars run Now it seems that my life has run its course I feel like an old wore out plow horse I don’t really see any reason to go on Without her in my life I have no driving force So now that the dreams that two begun Has turn into the nightmarish solitude of one I to am going to disappear For the reasons I have for staying around here are down to none But don’t let me make you blue It would be better if I just disappeared from view But before I go I want to know That I really did love you So now before I change my mind and start anew I would truly like to thank you For what love you did show to me And with that I bid you Adieu |
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Kay Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 70 |
It hurts to lose someone, but I chose my quote for a reason, it always "means something" to love. I hope that gives you some comfort. I've felt this pain. Kay |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hiya..I like this.  Check your e-mail.  still d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
She wasnt worth your time if she could just walk away |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I would say keep an open heart; love is real, you just haven't found it. Kathleen Blake |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
there are those out there who would play us the fool because we still believe in love. . . try not to let them to. . . follow your heart, but if your mind tells you they're bad. . . listen to it. . . excellent words. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In having thought on this, long and hard...sometimes the love was there, for awhile... and sometimes we discover that we erred... we didn't lie... we thought we were right... some things change... good write. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"So now that the dreams that two begun Has turn into the nightmarish solitude of one" Powerful and emotive sentiments you've penned Alan ... you've captured a pain so many of us have known, very nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'The hard part is that I don’t know what I have done This old world has lost all its fun Even the sun has hid it face When I go out at night even the stars run Now it seems that my life has run its course I feel like an old wore out plow horse I don’t really see any reason to go on Without her in my life I have no driving force So now that the dreams that two begun Has turn into the nightmarish solitude of one I to am going to disappear For the reasons I have for staying around here are down to none' Wonderful expression of such painful feelings, Alan...I liked this a lot! Great write... sp  to be with you... |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
Continue your poetic writings, for which I seek solitude. Don't leave on her account, for she has not leave you at all. It hit me hard. LLP |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Thank you all for the kind words on this poem of mine. |
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