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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-04-29 06:36 PM

Understood In A Shadow

let me
whisper to you
these things
of tangled strings
and angel’s wings

words spoken
without any sound
only to
angels and shadows
found

one last time
to close a door
to shiver
then offer more

inspiring me
to more not less
with words
my soul
caress

and my soul
is not alone
won’t die
understood
in a shadows sigh

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 04-29-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-04-29 06:38 PM

I'd love to know about the feelings that went into your writing this. I enjoyed reading but I felt there is more.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2001-04-29 06:44 PM

I guess like Irish Rose, I have to say this is lovely music, but I'm not sure about the feelings. Joyce

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-04-30 12:15 PM

Perhaps it is the feeling of existing in a world more complex than comprehension bears while still being understood in a space as small as a shadow. Whatever it is, it is sublime!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-04-30 01:11 PM

knowing the shadows. . .

excellent helen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

painted lady
Junior Member

since 2001-04-01

Posts 48
on the wing or nectaring

5 posted 2001-04-30 07:44 PM

Feelings aptly expressed!

Like others of yours I've read, this bears well several readings.

"in a shadows sigh"... excellent last line! Well done!

p l

And then my heart with pleasure fills,
And dances with the daffodils. Wm Wordsworth (I Wondered Lonely as a Cloud)

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

6 posted 2001-05-03 12:59 PM

understood . . . there . . .
very nice, h

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latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

7 posted 2001-05-03 01:18 AM

I enjoyed and understood, for there are times I feel I'm in the shadow of love.LP

He is my pen, I am but the paper he
writes on.
~~3LW~~SM

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