Open Poetry #13 |
Out of Their Kaleidoscope |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Virginia Salter mountains stand, majestic, overlooking valleys, cities, in grand array of color purple, magenta, umber and green beneath heaven’s azure above golden grain out of their kaleidoscope raven and eagle soar on the wing robin and meadow lark in full chorus sing deer, bear and antelope play in the wood rabbit and ferret encompass the good fox and kit, beaver and pup drink in the pleasure of nature’s full cup rivulets and rills descend over rocks brooks and streams race toward the docks fish and eel crawdad and clam dancing, cavorting toward sweet beaver’s dam all of creation in balance so true a gift from the heavens this wildlife zoo rejoice in its beauty give song to the sky pirouette ‘neath the raindrops and let your hearts fly ©April 29, 2001 |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
very magistic picture. LP |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Living in the mountains, much of what your mind's eye painted is familiar to me, but you painted it all so beautifully. I am so thankful to be able to see it first of all, and to experiece it, again in this fine form of poetry, thank you. Please visit me at my new homepage: |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a beautiful description of majestic nature and its life. Joyce |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Natures true beauty and spendour !! you portrayed most wonderfully in your words Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Natures true beauty and spendour !! you portrayed most wonderfully in your words Hope |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
This is such a lovely picture... no paint brush could do it justice.... May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
there's nothing like having this picture leap out at you like this. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I'm so happy people have found this one, it is certainly one of my favorites and I feel very blessed for it to have come to me through such a simple source. Inspiration can be rivetting, yes? Thank you all for your wonderfulm encouraging comments! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
When I was a kid I wanted to live in the woods with the animals...now I am a city dweller. Perhaps it is time to rethink things! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I adore the mountains, the streams. Often we go there and while he fishes I write....I find such inspiration there. This is wonderful. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is magical....I can see the kaleidoscope of imagery vividly.... hugs to you... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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