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latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

0 posted 2001-04-29 11:19 AM

The clouds are thick for I can't find you.
And those I did, weren't you.
My hands are reaching out,
pleading for help, but where are you?

Up early at day break,
with hope of promise, I did seek.
I can't click your name,
for all to see, see me as I am.

This paper is no good, without my
pen to help, for I am running amuck.
Once again, please guide me thru,
before we those strings get cut.

This is not what this person desires,
for true to her word, she'd stay.
She wants not for him to leave this place,
that was once HIS special place.
But yet at the same time, she doesn't want
to intrude, for the keys are they misplaced?

So slowly she is fading away, her name will
be her only etched in time. Everything else
matters not, without her teacher beside.

[This message has been edited by latin passion (edited 04-29-2001).]

La Matadora
New Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 3

1 posted 2001-04-29 12:54 PM

Your language usage leads to quite vivid drawings and paintings in my mind. I enjoyed this one - keep writing!

Amuse_mi
Member

since 2001-04-22

Posts 110

2 posted 2001-04-29 12:59 PM

This makes me remember we would be no where with out our teachers.
Wonderful sentiment.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-04-29 02:17 PM

the one that teaches us love will always be lost. . . for they are only here to point us in the way. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

4 posted 2001-04-29 11:50 PM

To all I thank you for the support and notes you made.
La Matadora ~ I'm glad my drawing were paint- although not expertley. I raise my hat in honor.
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Amuse_me ~~ I agree, what would we be without our teachers. For they have to have the patience of Joeb. You read my emotions of what I was feeling.
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Sven~~ so true to his word. For I didn't walk alone....I thank your for your kind words.

I salute you, for your kinds words and gestures. It's now nightime, and the beam is now burning bright.

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

5 posted 2001-05-04 05:54 PM

Patience encourages ever so softly, gently given without asking anything in return. For each gives to each other, freely under their own wills; without conditions. Just Love.
To everyone...thank you.
LP

Day in Day out...My love for you grows.
Without you, my life would be empty. So I hold my mustard seed of faith in us.

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

6 posted 2001-06-05 08:31 AM

a beautiful write you've done here

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