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thecraig
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0 posted 2001-04-29 06:06 AM



Skipping Clouds with my Fairy Princess;
Our Heart & mind be one,
Filled with joy & Fun
with the brightness of the sun
We can start our little run;
Between each cloud where we can peek;
Under our wings We try to sneak,
A view of you & you & you
To help to do what you want to do;
Then alone in our special life dance,
A cloud hand in hand, a prance;
Cotton cushion trailing prints is all we leave behind,
Onward through the Bright blue Sky
brilliance there to find:


© Copyright 2001 Craig Poole - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-04-29 07:10 AM


a charming write....enjoyed!
Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2001-04-29 07:45 AM


"Cotton cushion trailing prints is all we leave behind, "

This was delightful thecraig!  Very visual phrasing, an enchanting read!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

OLIAS
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3 posted 2001-04-29 08:26 AM


A bouncy trouncy fun flight, I enjoyed the ride Thanks.

Regards,
Olias

snowpants
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4 posted 2001-04-29 10:56 AM


Refreshingly cute write, craig!  I enjoyed this a lot!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...

latin passion
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5 posted 2001-04-29 12:35 PM


very lovely.
Amuse_mi
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6 posted 2001-04-29 01:02 PM


As brilliant as a sunny day.
Great piece.
I love the tweety and the dolphin.


helen smith
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7 posted 2001-05-09 04:50 PM


ooooh I just found this one  ... you lovely one .....it is         pretty  
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