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Take me back
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Take me back |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Why is it that my blindness Is so clearly seen when looking back? Why is it that my kindness Only leaves me open to attack? Why is it that my heart Just ends up getting in the way? Why is it that we part In silence with so much to say? Why is it that we hold Onto our pride with all our might? Why do our lives unfold As we miss chances to make right? Why did we meet at this young age Instead of when were older? Why do I cry upon this page Instead of on your shoulder? Why do you hold my everything, The life that I now lack? Why wont you take this love I bring? Why wont you take me back? |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
WOW - awesome!!! I hope she does take you back. Your words are some that I seek. Does one have to swallow pride, to make the other speak. There's a oldier but goodie movie called "The Women" the b&w version. The cast is entirely women, where she realizes she can't have pride, for what's at stake in the name of love. I wish you luck my friend. I too am in your shoes, except that I'm a female. But if your friend is seeking solitude in your special place, guide her where to look. LP |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I know this is a hard place to be... sometimes its not over... they want to watch us... stay strong and hope for the best...perhaps the best for you is someone else.. time will tell the story...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kevin...good questions. The answers will come. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent writing Kevin! You've penned this with such emotion ... wonderful questions to ponder, and so heartfelt, very well done indeed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Very well put. I hate being in this position, as does everyone I am sure. When of your best writes Kevin. Glad to see you back!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Enjoyed reading this, Kev... sad words, yet touching and sweet... -Tier |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Kevin I don't think I've seen your work before. Very nice. The answers will come. Joyce |
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