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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
these are haiku's, apparently. i don't like the rigid form, but i've got plenty of paper and will eventually scribble one that i really like. anyway, here goes...tom ---- The eunicid worms build coral reefs with small rocks. Thus Natures survives. ---- Woodchips, asphalt, grass. The Chicago Park District five hundred such isles. ---- Mother of all, Earth. Grocery store grows no food. Ever seen a farm? ---- Do you like it when i read over your shoulder? How do you feel then? (some guy next to me inspired that) ---- dirt, earth, soil grass bursts from the ground work, strive, toil |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good starts... liked the second to the last...that always bugs me too! |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Haiku or not, minimalist poems are good! \\ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I think you're wll on your way. Joyce |
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Amuse_mi Member
since 2001-04-22
Posts 110 |
Oh, I hate that-when people read over my shoulder. Makes me think they're expecting me to do something wrong.  |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
I too don't like to be looked over my shoulder. But a plot of land, and sink your hand... it's so rewarding. LP |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
I think they are great, but hey I don't know much about haiku's so I'm not judge and I too hate people watching over my shoulder Grrrr  ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... |
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