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PoemCrazy
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0 posted 2001-04-28 10:01 PM





elements of passion







passion as fire:
it burns,
it makes you itch,
it makes you sweat, wet.




passion as water:
it soothes,
it makes you move,
it makes you crest, yes.




passion as earth:
it holds,
it makes you warm,
it makes you rest, blest.




passion as air:
it lifts,
it makes you stir,
it makes you dream, serene.


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latin passion
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1 posted 2001-04-29 02:34 AM


How I wish I could sleep and have a wonderful dream. You wove a passion that would make one swoon. LP
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2 posted 2001-04-29 06:59 AM


other than being a little hard to read....

I enjoyed the entire poem!

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