Open Poetry #13 |
Casting Light |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Casting Light slumbering under witch’s spell knowing I cast just as well viewing now a moon lit peak saying words learned in speak fine as a feathers dust wind with a bit of gust sweet as a charms twinkle salted down in a sprinkle just as the light defines revealed now in it’s signs let the heart that bleeds heal fast do not let the pain last and in the tears that flow reverse now and happiness glow please listen to my plea light, I ask this of thee [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 04-28-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and add my words now unto to hers that all ill wish shall be returned hatred now a trace of tear-- the memory of yesterday... A special Beltane plea obsessed relieve this heart now in distress and grant her, now the Goddess bless-- and let the healing now take place. Blessed be, Helen. My Beltane wish for you! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
very "old world" very nice, Helen. Kathleen Blake |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very sweet poetry. Joyce |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A good read...a heartfelt plea... |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
This gets better everytime I read it. Finely crafted. May you be blessed with sparkling tears. \\ |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
I want to say thank you for my eyes seeing your verse. It made my heart feel lighter after each verse. The words formed their magic, as I started to see my self. I look forward to it's spendor of what's to come. LP |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done goddess of light. . . well done. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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