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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-04-28 08:46 PM



Casting Light

slumbering under witch’s spell
knowing I cast just as well
viewing now a moon lit peak
saying words learned in speak
fine as a feathers dust
wind with a bit of gust
sweet as a charms twinkle
salted down in a sprinkle
just as the light defines
revealed now in it’s signs
let the heart that bleeds heal fast
do not let the pain last
and in the tears that flow
reverse now and happiness glow
please listen to my plea
light, I ask this of thee



[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 04-28-2001).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-04-28 09:15 PM


and add my words
now unto to hers
that all ill wish
shall be returned
hatred now a trace of tear--
the memory of yesterday...
A special Beltane plea obsessed
relieve this heart now in distress
and grant her, now the Goddess bless--
and let the healing now take place.

Blessed be, Helen. My Beltane wish for you!

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-04-28 09:39 PM


very "old world" very nice, Helen.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2001-04-28 09:57 PM


Very sweet poetry.  Joyce
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2001-04-28 10:05 PM


A good read...a heartfelt plea...
wandering glider
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aloft
5 posted 2001-04-29 01:15 AM


This gets better everytime I read it.
Finely crafted.
May you be blessed with sparkling tears.

       \\
~=====}:
       //

latin passion
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6 posted 2001-04-29 01:53 AM


I want to say thank you for my eyes seeing your verse. It made my heart feel lighter after each verse. The words formed their magic, as I started to see my self. I look forward to it's spendor of what's to come. LP
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7 posted 2001-04-29 02:28 PM


well done goddess of light. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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