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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-04-28 06:04 PM

Melt In Your Mouth

I got my fresh chocolate kisses today
and now I am a happy man.
Moist sweet chocolate is meant
to melt in the mouth
before it goo's in the hand.
I was wondering when we would find
ourselves together kissing once more.
Now it has become obvious
that many more kisses are in store.
Somehow I knew she would understand
that I am her chocolate kiss man.

Jameslee@April28,2001
© Copyright 2001 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2001-04-28 07:12 PM

Ok chocolate kiss man...lick  that residue off your lips...did I say that??? *s  you are happy today..and that is so nice...
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Amuse_mi
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2 posted 2001-04-28 07:15 PM

Peanut M & M's~my favorite.  Awesome job.  A calorie free chocolate fix!
Sven
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3 posted 2001-04-28 08:32 PM

James, mind sharing??  LOL  

love this one. . .

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2001-04-28 08:37 PM

Oh, this is so charming and....chocolatte.....
walker
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5 posted 2001-04-28 09:25 PM

Are you a chocolate addict? I am.
Lovely poem!
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-04-28 09:54 PM

Thank you Wynter...yes happiness is nice.
Amuse me actually it was hersheys kisses..
Sven I'll share the chocolate but Michelles lips are all mine...at least for the moment.
Sunshine it is always a wonderful time for me when I am with her.
walker no not really...chocolate is nice...when Michelle places those chocolate kisses on her tongue and kisses me I become a Michelle addict.
Thanks for the lovely responses...James
Bill Charles
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7 posted 2001-04-28 11:30 PM

JamesMichael - what a sweet writing. Just amazing!

BC
Joyce Johnson
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8 posted 2001-04-29 12:22 PM

Oh, this is your best yet.  I loved it.  Joyce
latin passion
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9 posted 2001-04-29 01:23 AM

Love chocolate.... mmmmmmmh.
Tiersdin
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10 posted 2001-05-03 04:03 PM

Chocolate kisses from someone special is always twice as nice! *smiles*

enjoyed the poem!

~Tier
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11 posted 2001-05-03 07:39 PM

Oooh...got me with the chocolate...MMMMM... ...but seriously, very cute write, James!  I liked it a lot!

sp  

to be with you...
I've tried to hide my passion,
but it's just no use...
piece by piece I lose it
when you walk in the room...
Irish Rose
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12 posted 2001-05-03 08:44 PM

I love Baby Ruth.....and PayDay!

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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13 posted 2001-05-03 11:10 PM

chocolate kiss man??? hummmmm interesting....love this...


Lauren~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."
Kit McCallum
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14 posted 2001-05-04 08:10 AM

What a delectible read James ... brings a sweet smile just thinking about this, much enjoyed this delicious verse!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
Paula Finn
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15 posted 2001-05-05 11:06 PM

Oh you naughty thing...leaving me craving!!!!!!!
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